My stories
Hi Nick,I like your stories. You have a good imagination.A couple of fixes you may consider;reword the following sentence (remove about or add an it)If the wrong person finds out about it can be used against you to kill you. change were to we're in the following;Nothing, were brothersKeep up the writing! You have talent.
thanks for the help
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Hi Nick,
I like your stories. You have a good imagination.
A couple of fixes you may consider;
reword the following sentence (remove about or add an it)
If the wrong person finds out about it can be used against you to kill you.
change were to we're in the following;
Nothing, were brothers
Keep up the writing! You have talent.
thanks for the help
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